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happydumps
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What did I do wrong
To make them not love me.
What did I do wrong
To make them not care.
Love them, did I
With all of my being.
But now,
Where have they gone?

Alone in a room.
Solitary confinement.
A prison sentence
But no crime.
When will this end
My pain and torment.
To the door
Who holds the key?

I try to show them I'm suffering.
I try to show them I hurt.
But I know nobody's listening
So I lie here,
Completely inert.

But now
A much needed rescue.
Someone to open the door.
Yes, Someone is here to love me
Someone, who heard my call.

Pain is now a stranger.
Freedom, Pleasure mine.
The joy of knowing someone loves you
That joy is mine, all mine.

John Pearce. Aged 10. 1988.
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Post by Alison B »

A brilliant poem. Out of the mouths of babes! :)
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Post by janhind »

what a wise young man, jan xx
It is never too late.
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Post by Glenys »

Lovely
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Post by jackiem »

What a lovely poem.
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Post by Mad Maisie »

LOVELY!!!!!!
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