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Abandoned

Posted: 16 Jun 2008, 20:34
by happydumps
What did I do wrong
To make them not love me.
What did I do wrong
To make them not care.
Love them, did I
With all of my being.
But now,
Where have they gone?

Alone in a room.
Solitary confinement.
A prison sentence
But no crime.
When will this end
My pain and torment.
To the door
Who holds the key?

I try to show them I'm suffering.
I try to show them I hurt.
But I know nobody's listening
So I lie here,
Completely inert.

But now
A much needed rescue.
Someone to open the door.
Yes, Someone is here to love me
Someone, who heard my call.

Pain is now a stranger.
Freedom, Pleasure mine.
The joy of knowing someone loves you
That joy is mine, all mine.

John Pearce. Aged 10. 1988.

Posted: 16 Jun 2008, 22:09
by Alison B
A brilliant poem. Out of the mouths of babes! :)

Posted: 17 Jun 2008, 10:11
by janhind
what a wise young man, jan xx

Posted: 17 Jun 2008, 10:17
by Glenys
Lovely

Posted: 17 Jun 2008, 10:43
by jackiem
What a lovely poem.
Jackie

Posted: 17 Jun 2008, 12:50
by Mad Maisie
LOVELY!!!!!!