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Puppy in a Mirror

Postby Glenys » 06 Feb 2010, 19:53

One for Martin and Buddy :thumbright:


PUPPY IN THE MIRROR

I am a mischievous puppy, looking for things to do
I will go into my Mums Bedroom, and find something special to chew.
But as I walk past the wardrobe I see and incredible sight
For standing right there is a puppy, he gave me a terrible fright
I give him my fiercest bark and growl and look just as brave as I could
That pup he just looks back at me as if he is made of wood
I know I will get up closer, our noses are touching see
But now my Mum is calling I think I must go for my tea

As I turn to leave I see he is turning too
I bark I will be back later, perhaps I can play with you.

Each Time I go into the bedroom ,That pup he is always there
Though even when I stare at him there is never a sound to hear
I notice he is getting bigger he is ……just as big as me
I wonder will he always be here
And why he won’t play with me.


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Re: Puppy in a Mirror

Postby CarolynM » 06 Feb 2010, 20:11

Thats lovely Glenys - a real talent :1954:
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Re: Puppy in a Mirror

Postby Lins » 06 Feb 2010, 20:49

Brilliant :thumbup: You can just imagine Buddy doing this. :1968:
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Re: Puppy in a Mirror

Postby kayj » 07 Feb 2010, 13:21

Glenys the poem is just brilliant,you are so talented.Another book perhaps. :hello1: :hello1:

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Re: Puppy in a Mirror

Postby rhoda4 » 07 Feb 2010, 15:00

Great poem. I can just visualise it. :1992: :thumbright: :1968:

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Re: Puppy in a Mirror

Postby Ann Mee » 07 Feb 2010, 15:46

Brilliant poem Glenys what a talent you have for writing. You should get them printed up in a book. I can just imagine Buddy's little face now looking in the mirror!

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Re: Puppy in a Mirror

Postby Glenys » 07 Feb 2010, 17:13

I am happy for my poems to go into a book we did a poem books some years ago but if we can find a way pof printing it at a reasonable price it may be worth it.
I had poems published in two books in the past His Masters Voice and forgot what the other one was called I actually received royalies for one :thumbright:
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Re: Puppy in a Mirror

Postby Melliott » 08 Feb 2010, 00:02

Brilliant Glenys - I could visualise it too.

You are very talented - I would buy a book with your poems in.

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Re: Puppy in a Mirror

Postby Diesel Kate » 08 Feb 2010, 11:15

Brilliant :1951: :1951: :1951: :1951: :1951: :1951:
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Re: Puppy in a Mirror

Postby Mad Maisie » 08 Feb 2010, 13:48

Brilliant!!!!!

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Re: Puppy in a Mirror

Postby mollysmum » 08 Feb 2010, 14:59

I love it Glenys, you have a real talent.
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